Apparently, some of you are having trouble with the google doc. Please use this blog for your thesis assignment.
Use this document to post your thesis statements and topic
sentences
Directions: Write your full name, thesis statement and topic
sentences in the order to plan to discuss them in your essay.
If you’d like, you may offer others feedback on their work
if you’d like, but this is not a requirement and meant to be constructive (in
other words, to HELP improve others’ work, without being negative or adversely
judgmental).
Example:
Élice Hennessee
Thesis: Write your thesis here.
Topic Sentence 1: This is the first supporting claim I plan to
use in the body paragraphs of my essay and this is how it ties into my thesis.
Topic Sentence 2: This is the second supporting claim I plan to
use in the body of my essay and this is how it ties into my first supporting
claim and thesis.
Topic Sentence 3:
Topic Sentence 4:
Etc…
FEEDBACK: Someone
may add a line for feedback and give advice (like peer review). You may post
what you think could be improved upon, assumptions that may be present and/or counter-arguments
one may pose. Anyone can add on to this section.
Now, go forth and write… ;)
Jared Thieme
ReplyDeleteThesis: In Reporting Live from Tomorrow, a chapter from Daniel Gilbert’s Stumbling on Happiness, he emphasizes greatly on an individual’s choices and how it might affect their future.
Topic Sentence 1: The use of a surrogate and the importance they hold in society is greatly underestimated.
Topic Sentence 2: One can rely on a surrogate to further their knowledge of a subject based upon a colleague’s experience, but another option is available.
Topic Sentence 3: Surrogates can not only supply information, but they can have a great influence on social growth as well.
Rachel Frailich
ReplyDeleteDaniel Gilbert’s “Reporting Live From Tomorrow” is a reading based on his belief that information spread by super-replicators is inaccurate and is used for propaganda purposes. Gilbert applies his knowledge to the information he shares using arguments to his beliefs such as examples and facts. Gilbert’s use of real life studies give a reason for the reader to agree with him and see his perspective. The facts that support his evidence help support his beliefs as well. Through these arguments Gilbert tries to inform the reader that super-replicators are manipulative and explain why society believes super-replicators anyway.
Thesis: Through these arguments Gilbert tries to inform the reader that super-replicators are manipulative and explain why society believes super-replicators anyway.
Topic Sentence 1: Daniel Gilbert’s “Reporting Live From Tomorrow” is a reading based on his belief that information spread by super-replicators is inaccurate and is used for propaganda purposes.
Topic Sentence 2: Gilbert applies his knowledge to the information he shares using arguments to his beliefs such as examples and facts.
Topic Sentence 3: Gilbert’s use of real life studies give a reason for the reader to agree with him and see his perspective. The facts that support his evidence help support his beliefs as well.
FEEDBACK PLEASE!
(I’m not sure if I used my thesis statement correctly or if the sentence is a thesis statement to begin with. I think I used the topic sentences correctly.)
All of your sentence structure is very good! You might want to consider introducing the work (like you have done in topic sentence one) in the thesis statement.
ReplyDeleteMonica Tyo
ReplyDeleteThesis Statement: In "Reporting Live from Tomorrow," Daniel Gilbert draws the conclusion that we as a society all think we are to unique and different to have the same opinion as others, he gives multiple examples to where we could benefit from using surrogates, but he does leave out some statistics that could contradict his previous statements.
Topic Sentence 1: Gilbert claims that we always overlook using surrogates because we never stop to think that someone has probably done the same task we are about to attempt.
Topic Sentence 2: He gives relatable examples of where using surrogacy could have came in handy.
Topic Sentence 3: Gilbert gives the example of when married couples have children their happiness declines, but he failed to put in the statistics of the married couples that never had children and what happened to their happiness.
Anhkhoi Vu
ReplyDeleteThesis Statement: In the chapter “Reporting Live From Tomorrow” from Daniel Gilbert’s “Stumbling on Happiness”, Gilbert believes there are beliefs known as super-replicators that deceive people and describes why people believe these super-replicators even though they’re not true.
Topic Sentence 1: Gilbert believes that super-replicators are actually deceptive because people believe them for their own “good” when in reality doesn’t do much good for them.
Topic Sentence 2: Gilbert uses various examples and graphs to prove how super-replicators influence people.
Topic Sentence 3: Gilbert tries to persuades the reader by using his examples of studies and facts to convince the reader that super-replicators exist and how much they affect people.
Francisco Garcia
ReplyDeleteThesis: In “Reporting Live from Tomorrow,” Daniel Gilbert explains how people can use other peoples’ experiences to ensure their pursuit of happiness to their future decisions in life.
Topic Sentence 1: Surrogates are a great benefit to people when searching for an answer without experiencing it themselves.
Topic Sentence 2: Surrogates, still, are often not the best source of information to go for due to the fact that they may have a different opinion about a certain topic than the other person.
Topic Sentence 3: Everyone is unique, which is why people must have the benefit of experiencing things themselves to obtain their own true opinion.
Quinn Piper
ReplyDeleteThesis: In Daniel Gilbert’s, “Reporting Live from Tomorrow”, it is important to recognize that others experiences can often times have higher beneficial rewards than one might think.
Topic Sentence 1: Seeing what others have gone through is a great way to see if it is the right path to follow.
Topic Sentence 2: By viewing and understanding mistakes that other people have made, one can do their best to avoid them, making it easier to achieve happiness.
Topic Sentence 3: In certain situations, surrogacy may not be the best way to approach a task.
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